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교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-05-03
작성글 My favorite sport is dodgeball and soccer.
first why do I like dodge ball because catching ball and dodging the opposites ball.
second why do I like soccer because running is fun and kicking ball and take awaying opposites ball is fun.
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My favorite sports are dodge ball and soccer.
Firstthe reason I like dodge ball is catching ball and dodging the opposites ball.
Second, I like soccer because running is fun and kicking ball and taking it away from the opposite side is fun.​ 

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