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제 목 210506 HOMEWORK
교정강사 Ernest(C)
등록일 2021-05-06
작성글 [HOMEWORK]
A. Make a sentence using the word "danger".
If I'm in danger, I will run from that place.
B. Make these sentences into English.

-안녕, 돌돌아, 반가워.
Hi Doldol, nice to meet you.
-안녕,심순아,방학 어땠니?
Hi simsoon, how was your vacation?
-멋졌어. 나는 뉴욕에 있는친구 브래드의 집에 갔었어.
It was great. I went Brad who living in New York.
교정내용

[HOMEWORK]

A. Make a sentence using the word "danger".

 If I'm in danger, I will run from that place. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​If I'm in danger place, I will go to safe zone.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

 

-안녕, 돌돌아, 반가워.

 Hi Doldol, nice to meet you. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Hi Doldol. Good you see again.

 

-안녕,심순아,방학 어땠니?

 Hi simsoon, how was your vacation? (capitalization) & (Punctuation)

Hi Simsoon. How was your vacation?

 

-멋졌어. 나는 뉴욕에 있는친구 브래드의 집에 갔었어.

 It was great. I went Brad who living in New York. => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

​It was wonderful. I visited my friend, Brad in N.Y.

 

Great work, Ryan! Keep it up! :)

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