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제 목 Homework
교정강사 Rome
등록일 2021-05-07
작성글 There are four seasons in Korea. Spring, summer, fall, and winter. And the people in here all know, as time goes by, that summer and winter are longer and longer. So now, spring and fall are slowly disappearing because of the environment destroy. I truly love my country and the four seasons. So, it is so sad for me to see those beautiful seasons disappearing.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(04/13/21)
-저희는 좋은 품질과 신뢰의 이미지가 있습니다.
We have an image of a good quality and trust.
-이 이미지를 만드는데 몇 년이나 걸렸지만 단 한번의 실수로 무너질 수도 있습니다.
Though it took several years to make this image, it can be ruined due to a single of mistake.
-고객들은 저희가 최고의 상품으로 보답할 거라 믿습니다.
Customers believe that we will reward as the best products.
교정내용

There are four seasons in Korea. Spring, summer, fall, and winter. And the people in here all know, as time goes by, that summer and winter are longer and longer. So now, spring and fall are slowly disappearing because of the environment that has been destroyed. I truly love my country and the four seasons. So, it is so sad for me to see those beautiful seasons disappearing.  ★★★


B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/13/21)

-저희는 좋은 품질과 신뢰의 이미지가 있습니다.

We have an image of a good quality and trust. -----> We have an image of fine quality and reliability.

-이 이미지를 만드는데 몇 년이나 걸렸지만 단 한번의 실수로 무너질 수도 있습니다.

Though it took several years to make this image, it can be ruined due to a single of mistake. ---> It took years to create this image, but it can break down with a single mistake.

-고객들은 저희가 최고의 상품으로 보답할 거라 믿습니다.

Customers believe that we will reward as the best products. ---- > Customers trust us to deliver the very best products.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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