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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-05-07
작성글 I read my poems on my Internet blog. When I read poems I wrote 10 years ago, I was refreshed. I never published them and I just have them.
Someday, I am planning to do, but I don't think it's a right time now. I am still not that proud of my poems. I just write poems like my dairy.
After I read them, I stay calm and have my inner peace.
I uploaded one of them to the webpage of poety club. I wonder what the club members talk about my poem.
Well, my daughter is going to go home from the dormitory today. She went to hopital for practice as a student for last 2 weeks.
I will go to the grocery store and buy some food for her. Especially, she likes DDukbuki so I will buy it. I am glad that she will be here. Bye

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I read my poems on my Internet blog. When I read the poems, I wrote 10 years ago. I was refreshed. I never published them and I just have them. Someday, I am planning to do it, but I don't think it's a right time now. I am still not that proud of my poems. I just write poems like my diary. After I read them, I stay calm and have my inner peace. I uploaded one of them on the web page of poetry club. I wonder what the club members would say about my poems. Well, my daughter is going to go home from the dormitory today. She went to the hospital for her internship for two weeks. I will go to the grocery store and buy some food for her. Especially, she likes DDukbuki so I will buy it. I am glad that she will be here. Bye

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