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교정강사 Jeraldine(C)
등록일 2022-05-16
작성글 BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (4)

✨ Please make three (3) sentences using the word "inside".

I went inside, and I saw a murderer's shadow.
He came inside and ordered one caramel Makiyatto to go.
I think you usually go inside when you angry.

✨ [Make these sentences into English]
(05/16/22)
-아이고 깜짝이야. 무슨 일이니?: Oh, my gosh. What happened?
-할로윈 행렬이야. 10월 31일은 할로윈 데이야.: It's Halloween procession.
-돌돌아, 미국에 온 것을 환영해!: Doldol, Welcome to the America.

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BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (4)

 

✨ Please make three (3) sentences using the word "inside".

 

I went inside, and I saw a murderer's shadow.  

 

He came inside and ordered one caramel Makiyatto to go.

  => Corrected : The spelling of this sentence has been corrected. 

~He came inside and ordered one caramel macchiato to go.​

 

I think you usually go inside when you angry.

  => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.   

~I think you usually go inside when you angry.​

 

✨ [Make these sentences into English]

(05/16/22)

-아이고 깜짝이야. 무슨 일이니?

Oh, my gosh. What happened?

  => Your sentence is correct, but here's another way of saying it. 

~Wow. What a surprise! What's happening?

 

-할로윈 행렬이야. 10월 31일은 할로윈 데이야.

It's Halloween procession.

  => Your sentence is correct, but here's another way of saying it.

~It's the Halloween parade. It's Halloween Day on October 31st.

 

-돌돌아, 미국에 온 것을 환영해!

Doldol, Welcome to the America.

  => Corrected : The capitalization of this sentence has been corrected. 

~Doldol, welcome to America!

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