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제 목 (05/16/22)
교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2022-05-19
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What is the difference between a good investment and a bad investment?
I think the difference is the attitude of the person who invest in something.
When people want to invest in something, they need to search the information about it.
And they decide whether it's a good investment or a bad investment.
Then it's a good investment.
But if people don't look for the information about the investment, it's not good.
So in my opinion, the most important factor is the procedure to consider whether it's reasonable.


B. Make these sentences into English.

-오늘 초과 근무할 수 있어요? Can you work overtime today?
-이번 토요일에 출근할 수 있어요? Could you go to work this Saturday?
-부탁 좀 드려도 될까요? May I ask favor?
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HOMEWORK:

A. What is the difference between a good investment and a bad investment?

 

I think the difference is the attitude of the person who invests in something. When people want to invest in something, they need to search the information about it. And they decide whether it's a good investment or a bad investment. It's a good investment, if people don't look for information about the investment, it's not good. So, in my opinion, the most important factor is to consider whether it's reasonable.

 

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

(Punctuation)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

 

-오늘 초과 근무할 있어요? Can you work overtime today?

-이번 토요일에 출근할 있어요? Could you go to work this Saturday? -> Can you come in this Saturday?

-부탁 드려도 될까요? May I ask favor? -> Can you do me a favor?

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them. 

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