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교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-05-23
작성글 .) Which among the people in the business world do you admire the most and why? Please elaborate on your answer.

I think the people who can keep work, life and balance. Because in this society they have many things to do, it is very difficult to keep the balance of the life. So I really admire them.

B.) Make these sentences into English.


-파일 정리하는 법을 알려 줄 수 있으세요?
Can you teach me how organize the files.
-저 좀 도와주실 수 있으세요?
Could you help me?
-바쁜 줄 알지만 부탁 좀 해도 될까요?
Can I request to you that I know you are busy?
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.) Which among the people in the business world do you admire the most and why? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

I think the people who can keep work, life and balance. Because in this society they have many things to do, it is very difficult to keep the balance of the life. So I really admire them.

 

=>  I think the people who can keep their work and balance their private lives. Because in this society they have many things to do, it is very difficult to keep a balance in the life. So I really admire them.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

 

-파일 정리하는 법을 알려 줄 수 있으세요?

Can you teach me how organize the files.

=> Can you show me how to organize the files?

 

-저 좀 도와주실 수 있으세요?

Could you help me?  

 

-바쁜 줄 알지만 부탁 좀 해도 될까요?

Can I request to you that I know you are busy?

=> I know you're busy, but can I ask a favor of you?

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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