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제 목 What health problems can longer flights cause?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-06-03
작성글 A.) What health problems can longer flights cause? Please elaborate on your answer.

The longer flight would put a passenger to maintain a fixed posture to affect the bloodstream.
It would also force to stay high in the air to weaken consciousness.
Those symptoms make up the jetlag which costs much time to restore.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(05/30/22)

-한잔 더 할래?
Would you like another drink?

-여기 음식 먹을 만한 곳 있어요?
Is there any place to eat?

-어떤 타입의 남자를 좋아해?
What kind of guys do you like?
교정내용

A.) What health problems can longer flights cause? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 The longer flight would put a passenger to maintain a fixed posture to affect the bloodstream.

 It would also force to stay high in the air to weaken consciousness.

 Those symptoms make up the jetlag which costs much time to restore.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/30/22)

 

-한잔 더 할래?

 Would you like another drink?  

 

-여기 음식 먹을 만한 곳 있어요?

 Is there any place to eat?  

 

-어떤 타입의 남자를 좋아해?

 What kind of guys do you like?

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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