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제 목 6/7 Jack HW
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-06-07
작성글 {HOMEWORK}
A.) What kind of websites are banned in your country?
In the internet, banned websiteare Deep Web and Dark Web. Internet says Deep Web is bad website and Dark Web is awful website.
Many costomers in Deep Web or Dark Web are criminals. So, you can think the situation in those websites. I can`t go any further. Sorry.
(I didn`t have any imformation, so I asked to my parents and I used internet. Sorry again.)
B.) Make these sentences into English.

(06/07/22)

-무엇을 도와 드릴까요? = What do I help you?
-우편엽서를 사고 싶은데 찾을 수 가 없네요. = I want to buy postcard but I can`t found it.
-여기에 우편 엽서가 많이 있어요. = Here is many postcards.
교정내용

{HOMEWORK}

A.) What kind of websites are banned in your country?

In the internet, banned websiteare Deep Web and Dark Web. Internet says Deep Web is bad website and Dark Web is awful website.

Many costomers in Deep Web or Dark Web are criminals. So, you can think the situation in those websites. I can`t go any further. Sorry.

(I didn`t have any imformation, so I asked to my parents and I used internet. Sorry again.)

 

=> On the internet banned websites are Deep Web and Dark Web. The Internet says Deep Web is a bad website and Dark Web is an awful website.

Many customers on Deep Web or Dark Web are criminals. So, you can think about the situation on those websites.

 

I can`t go any further. Sorry. (I didn`t have any imformation, so I asked to my parents and I used internet. Sorry again.)​

=> I can`t go any further. Sorry. (I didn`t have any information, so I asked my parents and I used the internet. Sorry again.)​​

 

​ It's okay, Jack. I appreciate your efforts in doing your homework always. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/07/22)

 

-무엇을 도와 드릴까요? = What do I help you?  => What can I do for you?

 

-우편엽서를 사고 싶은데 찾을 수 가 없네요. = I want to buy postcard but I can`t found it.  =>  I want to buy some postcards but I can't find them.


-여기에 우편 엽서가 많이 있어요. = Here is many postcards.  =>  There are many postcards here.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​ 

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