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I like the sea-home work |
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| 교정강사 | Lovely(D)O |
| 등록일 | 2022-06-14 |
| 작성글 |
I like the sea because at summer and when I swim in sea it is cool and I like swimming in the water. and seas are very beautiful so I like sea. |
| 교정내용 |
CORRECTIONS:
I like the sea on summer. When I swim in the sea, it's cool. I like swimming in the water. It's also beautiful so I like it.
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