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제 목 I like the sea-home work
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-06-14
작성글 I like the sea because at summer and when I swim
in sea it is cool and I like swimming in the water.
and seas are very beautiful so I like sea.
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I like the sea on summer.

When I swim in the sea, it's cool.

I like swimming in the water.

It's also beautiful so I like it.

 

 

 

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