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제 목 210319hw
교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-03-29
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. s it important that your house is ecologically friendly?

Yes. Although many modern people spend their time outside(transportaions, company, resturant etc), our own home is best place to take a deep rest .My mom always grow flowers and various plants. It helps us(me and my older sister) seeing greeny plant and have healthy mind. As such, we can change the environment ecologically with small efforts.
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-우리는 그를 응급실로 운반했다.
We carried him to emergency hospital.

-그녀가 아기를 살며시 침대에 내려 놓았다.
She lied her baby on the bed gently.

-나는 잔디 위에 누워 있었다.
I was lying on the grass.
교정내용

HOMEWORK:

 A. Is it important that your house is ecologically friendly?

 

Yes. Although​, many modern people spend their time outside (transportations, company, restaurant and etc), our own home is the best place to take a deep rest .My mom always grows flowers and various plants. It helps us (me and my older sister) seeing green plant and have healthy mind. As such, we can change the environment ecologically with small efforts.

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-우리는 그를 응급실로 운반했다.

We carried him to emergency hospital. ---> We carried him to the emergency room.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-그녀가 아기를 살며시 침대에 내려 놓았다.

She lied her baby on the bed gently. ---> She laid the baby gently on the bed.

 => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

 

-나는 잔디 위에 누워 있었다.

I was lying on the grass.​ 

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