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제 목 2022.06.16
교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2022-06-21
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What do you do to relieve your stress?
I sleep a lot when I stressed. Not, I want to turn it into a trap.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(06/16/22)
-회사는 이번 달에 더 많은 상품을 생산할 것이다.
T company will product more products this month
-댐은 농경지에 물을 공급한다.
Dam supplies water to agriculture land.
-그들은 공공장소에서 담배 피우는 것을 금지했다
They forbid smoking in public places.

Thank you very much*^^*
교정내용

HOMEWORK:

A. What do you do to relieve your stress?

I sleep a lot when I stressed. Not, I want to turn it into a trap. 

  => I sleep a lot when I am stressed (out). I don't want to feel trapped.

  => Corrected: The grammar of these sentences has been corrected.       ​ ​

B. Make these sentences into English.

(06/16/22)

-회사는 이번 달에 더 많은 상품을 생산할 것이다.

T company will product more products this month 

  => The company will produce more goods this month.

  => Corrected: The grammar of these sentences has been corrected.       ​ ​

​​

-댐은 농경지에 물을 공급한다.

Dam supplies water to agriculture land.

  => Dams supply water to farmlands.​

  => Corrected: The grammar of these sentences has been corrected.      

 

-그들은 공공장소에서 담배 피우는 것을 금지했다

They forbid smoking in public places. 

  => They banned cigarette smoking in public places.​

  => Your sentence is correct, but here's another way of saying it.  

 

Thank you very much*^^*

No worries, Miss Jane! I'm sorry it took a while. Keep learning! ^^

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