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제 목 Why do people wear sunglasses?-home work
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-06-21
작성글 Why do peoples wear sunglasses?
It is all about the sunshine.
When the sun dazzle your eyes u can't keep opening ur eyes and it's not good for ur eyes.
So we need to hide a sunshine but we can't remove it!
So we wear sunglasses.
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 Why do people wear sunglasses?
It is about the sunshine.
When the sun dazzle your eyes, you can't keep your eyes open and it's not good for your eyes.
So we need to hide from the sunshine but we can't avoid it!
So we wear sunglasses.​

 
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