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교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-03-29
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. If you could own your own business, what would it be?

If I could own my own business, I want to operate my Youtube channel. I am enjoying Youtube channel Eva, Roha and A poet's vlog(It's a channel of Korea poet Boyoung Moon). They usually share thier daily life. And I want to! I plan to start my channel since I graduated from university and entered graduate school. Or I will marry, Vlog content will be more abundant.


-우리는 모든 문에 새 자물쇠를 달아야 했다.
We had to attach new locks to every doors.

-그가 머리를 정말 짧게 깎았다.
He had his hair cut really short.

-슈퍼마켓에서 음식을 살 거야.
I would buy food at the supermarket.
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HOMEWORK:

 A. If you could own your own business, what would it be?

 

If I could own my own business, I want to operate my Youtube channel. I am enjoying Youtube channel Eva, Roha and a poet's vlog(It's a channel of Korea poet Boyoung Moon). They usually share their daily life. And I want to! I have planned to start my channel since I graduated from university and entered graduate school. Or I will marry, Vlog content will be more abundant.

 

 

-우리는 모든 문에 새 자물쇠를 달아야 했다.

We had to attach new locks to every doors. ---> We had to put new locks on all the doors.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-그가 머리를 정말 짧게 깎았다.

He had his hair cut really short. ---> He's had his hair cut really short.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

-슈퍼마켓에서 음식을 살 거야.

I would buy food at the supermarket. ---> I'm going to get some food at the supermarket.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.​​

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