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교정강사 Agnes(C)
등록일 2021-05-11
작성글 These days, modern technology is getting better and better. Especially, advancement of car industry is amazing. Driving electric cars is better than gasoline cars. They are not only very quiet but very fast in a short time. We don't have to go to a gas station to buy gasoline that is bad for our environment. It is very eco-friendly. If we don't use gasoline cars anymore, we don't have to worry about air pollution.
In addition most eletiricity cars have some automatic driving systems. It is also getting better and better. It is very helpful to drive safely and comfortably. I think the number of deaths from car accidents will decrease.
Most of all, electricity is pretty cheap compared to gasoline. So modern technology is good for both our family budget economy and our environment.
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  These days, modern technology is getting better and better. Especially, the advancement of the car industry is amazing. Driving electric cars is better than gasoline cars. They are not only very quiet but very fast in a short time. We don't have to go to a gas station to buy gasoline that is bad for our environment. It is very eco-friendly. If we don't use gasoline cars anymore, we don't have to worry about air pollution.

  In addition, most electric cars have some automatic driving systems. It is also getting better and better.  It is very helpful to drive safely and comfortably. I think the number of deaths from car accidents will decrease. 

 Most of all, electricity is pretty cheap compared to gasoline. So modern technology is good for both our family budget economy and our environment. 

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