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제 목 What do I know about World war 2.-home work.
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-07-05
작성글 1.It was a very big war.
2.Adolf Hitler is the main culprit of the World war 2.
3.Adolf Hitler and his group named Nazi planned this war.
4.The war started at 1939 september 1st.
5.The war ended at 1945 september 2nd.
6.This war taked 6 years and 1day to end
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CORRECTIONS:

 

1. It was the biggest war.

2. Adolf Hitler is the main culprit of the World War 2.

3. Adolf Hitler and his group named Nazi planned this war.

4. The war started at 1939 of September 1st.

5. The war ended at 1945 of September 2nd.  

6. This war took 6 years and 1 days before it ended.

 

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