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제 목 Today's homework(7/6)
교정강사 Arah(C)
등록일 2022-07-06
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What was your favorite game when you were a kid?
My favorite game was wonder boy 1 and 2 when I was a kid. those days I could enjoy the game over 1 hour with only one coin(It is approximately 5 cents).
B. Make these sentences into English:
(07/06/22)
1.그 법은 신년 초에 발효될 것이다.
The law will be goes into effect from the beginning of the new year.
2.영화 마지막에 전 울었습니다.
I cried at the end of the movie.
3.그는 지금 여기 안 계십니다.
He is not here now.
교정내용

HOMEWORK:

A. What was your favorite game when you were a kid?

My favorite game was wonder boy 1 and 2 when I was a kid. 

Those days I could enjoy the game for over 1 hour with only one coin(It is approximately 5 cents). (Capitalization)

B. Make these sentences into English:

(07/06/22)

1.그 법은 신년 초에 발효될 것이다.

The law will be goes into effect from the beginning of the new year. -> The law will take effect at the beginning of the new year.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

2.영화 마지막에 전 울었습니다.

I cried at the end of the movie. -> At the end of the movie I was crying.

3.그는 지금 여기 안 계십니다.

He is not here now. -> He's not here at the moment.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

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