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제 목 Homework
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-07-21
작성글 {HOMEWORK}
A.) Tell me about a special event that took place in your neighborhood. Did anything memorable happen during that event? Please elaborate on your answer.

A traditional festival takes place in my neighborhood annually.
Usually it is held in autumn.
The place is Geumjungsanseong Fortress (I searched the word that we talked about in our class but they just say this one just in korean...!)
They let off fireworks in the opening
Not only various performances are prepared like a musical, korean classic music stage etc. but also we can buy and eat korean traditional foods like rice cake.
There are some games that usually children enjoy like Tuho which people throw sticks in a cainster.
When I was in elementary school I visited this festival annually with my family or my friends.
But after I grew up, I don't have much time to go there even it is a 10-minutes by bus.
This question reminds me of the festival I used to enjoyed in my childhood!






B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/21/22)

1. 여하튼 좋든 싫든 간에 넌 그걸 다 먹어야 해.
Anyway if you like it or not, you should eat all
2. 마지막으로 경고하겠어.
I warn you for the last time.
3. 그들은 영원히 서울을 떠났습니다.
They left Seoul forever.
교정내용

{HOMEWORK}

A.) Tell me about a special event that took place in your neighborhood. Did anything memorable happen during that event? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

A traditional festival takes place in my neighborhood annually. 

Usually it is held in autumn. 

The place is Geumjungsanseong Fortress (I searched the word that we talked about in our class but they just say this one just in korean...!)

They let off fireworks in the opening

Not only various performances are prepared like a musical, korean classic music stage etc. but also we can buy and eat korean traditional foods like rice cake. 

There are some games that usually children enjoy like Tuho which people throw sticks in a cainster. 

When I was in elementary school I visited this festival annually with my family or my friends. 

But after I grew up, I don't have much time to go there even it is a 10-minutes by bus.

This question reminds me of the festival I used to enjoyed in my childhood!

 

 

A traditional festival takes place in my neighborhood annually. 

Usually, it is held in autumn. 

The place is Geumjungsanseong Fortress (I searched the word that we talked about in our class but they just say this one just in Korean...!)

They let off fireworks in the opening

Not only various performances are prepared like a musical, Korean classic music stage etc. but also we can buy and eat Korean traditional foods like rice cakes

There are some games that usually children enjoy like Tuho which people throw sticks in a canister. 

When I was in elementary school, I visited this festival annually with my family or with my friends. 

But after I grew up, I don't have much time to go there even if it is a 10-minute ride by bus.

This question reminds me of the festival I used to enjoy in my childhood!​ 

 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/21/22)

 

1. 여하튼 좋든 싫든 간에 넌 그걸 다 먹어야 해.

Anyway if you like it or not, you should eat all 

=> Anyway, for better or for worse, you should eat them all up.

 

2. 마지막으로 경고하겠어.

I warn you for the last time. 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> I'm warning you for the last time.

 

3. 그들은 영원히 서울을 떠났습니다.

They left Seoul forever. ​ 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> They have left Seoul for good.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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