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제 목 Why is it important to control the python population in the Everglades?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-08-05
작성글 A.) Why is it important to control the python population in the Everglades? Please elaborate on your answer.

The python feeds on small mammals such as rabbit or rat, fox, which results in sharp decrease of their population.
It would be necessary to control the python population to maintain the balance of nature.
That would be the reason why it is important.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/29/22)

1. 이사 간다더니 날 잡았어요?
I heard that you would move. Have you decided the date?

2. 대가를 톡톡히 치르고 있는 중이에요
I am paying the price severely.

3. 두말없이 해 주던 걸
He didn't hesitate to do it.

교정내용

A.) Why is it important to control the python population in the Everglades? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

     The python feeds on small mammals such as rabbit or rat, fox, which results in sharp decrease of their population.

     It would be necessary to control the python population to maintain the balance of nature.

     That would be the reason why it is important.

 

=>      The python feeds on small mammals such as rabbits, rats, and foxes, which decreases their population sharply​.

     It would be necessary to control the python population to maintain the balance of nature.

     That would be the reason why it is important.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/29/22)

 

1. 이사 간다더니 날 잡았어요?

    I heard that you would move. Have you decided the date?

=>  I heard that you would move. Have you decided on the date?​

 

 

2. 대가를 톡톡히 치르고 있는 중이에요

   I am paying the price severely.  

3. 두말없이 해 주던 걸

   He didn't hesitate to do it.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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