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제 목 22.08.04
교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2022-08-09
작성글 A. What things about summer do you like most and least?
I like to play in water and hate not being able to play in water.
People don't like to play in the water as they get older.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(08/04/22)
1. 아니, 안좋아해. No,i don't like it
2. 뭐 먹을래? What do you want to have?
3. 저는 햄버거랑 우유요 i want to have hamburger and milk.
교정내용

A. What things about summer do you like most and least?

I like to play in water and hate not being able to play in water.

  => I like to play in the water and I hate not being able to play in the water.​​

  => Corrected: The grammar of this sentence has been corrected.      ​

 

People don't like to play in the water as they get older.     

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(08/04/22)

1. 아니, 안좋아해. No,i don't like it 

  => No, I don't like it.​​

  => Corrected: The capitalization of this sentence has been corrected.      ​ 

 

2. 뭐 먹을래? What do you want to have?     

 

3. 저는 햄버거랑 우유요 i want to have hamburger and milk.

  => I want a hamburger and milk.​​

  => Corrected: The capitalization of this sentence has been corrected.      ​​ 

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