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제 목 Writing homework(21.5.12)
교정강사 Sarah(C)
등록일 2021-05-12
작성글 Q:Where do you want to go, if there's no corona virus? Why?
A: I want to go to the amusement park with my friends. Because it must be fun.



-비가 왔거든.
It was rain.
-그래서 뭐했니? 집에 돌아왔니?
So what did you do? Did you come back to home?
-응, 그랬어.
Yes I did.
교정내용

​Q:Where do you want to go, if there's no corona virus? Why?

A: I want to go to the amusement park with my friends. Because it must be fun.

=> I want to go to the amusement park with my friends. I think it will be fun. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​

 

 

 

-비가 왔거든.

It was rain. => Because it was rainy? => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​

 

-그래서 뭐했니? 집에 돌아왔니?

So what did you do? Did you come back to home? => Then, what did you do? Did you go back home? => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​

 

-응, 그랬어.

Yes I did. (correct)

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