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교정강사 Kristina(C)
등록일 2022-08-11
작성글 HOMEWORK
A: Would you move if you lived in a country where natural disasters were common? Explain your answer.
If I lived in a country has lots of natural disaster like Japan, I would move to safe country. Because if there's lots of disaster, and I can die cause of the disaster. I don't wanna die early.
B: Make these sentences into English.
(08/09/22)
1. 그녀는 브랜드 가방을
좋아한다.
2. Alex와 Martin은 서로 싫어한다.
3. Tyler는 도둑을 알고 있다.
She likes the brand bag.
-Alex and Martin hates each other.
-Tyler knows the theif.
교정내용

A: Would you move if you lived in a country where natural disasters were common? Explain your answer.

If I lived in a country has lots of natural disaster like Japan, I would move to safe country. Because if there's lots of disaster, and I can die cause of the disaster. I don't wanna die early. *If I lived in a country, such as Japan, that experiences lots of natural disasters, I would move to a safe one. That's because I can be in danger due to disasters. I don't wanna die early. 

B: Make these sentences into English. 

1. 그녀는 브랜드 가방을 좋아한다. -She likes the brand bag.

*She likes branded bags.

~> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

2. Alex와 Martin은 서로 싫어한다. -Alex and Martin hates each other.
*Alex and Martin dislike each other.
~> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.
3. Tyler는 도둑을 알고 있다. -Tyler knows the thief.
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