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제 목 How can the government prevent a similar accident from happening again?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-08-14
작성글 {HOMEWORK}
A.) How can the government prevent a similar accident from happening again? Please elaborate on your answer.

Decrease of glaciers would be an unavoidable stream.
Those trails in glacier areas are vulnerable to avalanche.
So trekkers must not be allowed to access to the area.
That would be the most valid way to prevent a similar accident from happening again.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/08/22)

1. 그럭저럭 해나가고 있습니다.
I have managed to do it.

2. 6시면 저한테는 꼭두새벽이에요
6 o'clock is too early to me.

3. 동생이 대단한 미인이라면서
I heard that your sister is a beauty.
교정내용

{HOMEWORK}

A.) How can the government prevent a similar accident from happening again? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Decrease of glaciers would be an unavoidable stream.

Those trails in glacier areas  are vulnerable to avalanche.

So trekkers  must not be allowed to access to the area.

That would be the most valid way to prevent a similar accident from happening again.

 

=>  A decrease in glaciers would be an unavoidable stream.

Those trails in glacier areas are vulnerable to avalanches.

So trekkers must not be allowed access to the area.

That would be the most valid way to prevent a similar accident from happening again.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/08/22)

 

1. 그럭저럭 해나가고 있습니다.

  I have managed to do it.  

 

2. 6시면 저한테는 꼭두새벽이에요

   6 o'clock is too early to me. 

=>  ​Six o'clock is too early for me.

 

 

3. 동생이 대단한 미인이라면서

   I heard that your sister is a beauty.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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