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제 목 Homework
교정강사 Niah(C)
등록일 2022-08-18
작성글 A. Write about a time when you were at the hospital.
When My brother was sick, I went to the hospital with him. I saw a girl cried a lot because she didn't want to get a shot. She is four years older than my brother. My brother was five years old and didn't cry and got a shot.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(08/18/22)

1. 대단했지. 나는 제주도에
갔었어.
2. 재미있는 방학을
보냈구나.
3. 응, 너무 즐거운 방학을
보냈어.
-It was great. I went to Jeju island.
-You had a great vacation.
-Yes. I had really excited vacation.
교정내용

A. Write about a time when you were at the hospital.

When My brother was sick, I went to the hospital with him. I saw a girl cried a lot because she didn't want to get a shot. She is four years older than my brother. My brother was five years old and didn't cry and got a shot. (Correct)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(08/18/22)

 

1. 대단했지. 나는 제주도에

갔었어.

2. 재미있는 방학을

보냈구나.

3. 응, 너무 즐거운 방학을

보냈어.

-It was great. I went to Jeju island. (Correct)

 

-You had a great vacation. (Correct)

 

-Yes. I had really excited vacation. --> Yes, I had a good vacation.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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