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제 목 Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-09-07
작성글 A.) Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

Climbing is a challenging leisure sports. So it is vulnerable to accidents.
It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved.
Asking a deposit could be one of good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(09/07/22)

1. 마음을 털어놓을 수 있는 친구 있으세요?
Do you have friends whom you could consult about a concern?

2. 잠시 머리 좀 식히는 거야.
I am cooling down my head for a while.

3. 고인의 명복을 빕니다.
Pray for the bliss of the dead.

교정내용

A.) Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

    Climbing is a challenging leisure sports. So it is vulnerable to accidents.

    It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved.

    Asking a deposit could be one of good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not.

   

=>    Climbing is a challenging leisure sport. So it is vulnerable to accidents.

    It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved.

    Asking for a deposit could be one of the good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(09/07/22)

 

1. 마음을 털어놓을 수 있는 친구 있으세요?

    Do you have friends whom you could consult about a concern? 

 

2. 잠시 머리 좀 식히는 거야.

    I am cooling down my head for a while.  

 

3. 고인의 명복을 빕니다.

   Pray for the bliss of the dead. 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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