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제 목 | Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? |
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교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
등록일 | 2022-09-07 |
작성글 |
A.) Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. Climbing is a challenging leisure sports. So it is vulnerable to accidents. It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved. Asking a deposit could be one of good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/07/22) 1. 마음을 털어놓을 수 있는 친구 있으세요? Do you have friends whom you could consult about a concern? 2. 잠시 머리 좀 식히는 거야. I am cooling down my head for a while. 3. 고인의 명복을 빕니다. Pray for the bliss of the dead. |
교정내용 |
A.) Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.
Climbing is a challenging leisure sports. So it is vulnerable to accidents. It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved. Asking a deposit could be one of good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not.
=> Climbing is a challenging leisure sport. So it is vulnerable to accidents. It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved. Asking for a deposit could be one of the good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not.
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(09/07/22)
1. 마음을 털어놓을 수 있는 친구 있으세요? Do you have friends whom you could consult about a concern? ✔
2. 잠시 머리 좀 식히는 거야. I am cooling down my head for a while. ✔
3. 고인의 명복을 빕니다. Pray for the bliss of the dead. ✔
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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