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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-05-13
작성글 It's hot today. It seems like summer.
Actually it was chilly 3 days ago. It's hot from the day before yesterday.
The weather is hot but I like summer. There is nothing special to do during summer season. But I easily feel cold so I don't need to worry about cold weather in summer. My husband is opposite. He hates hot weather. So he turns on the air conditioner all the time in his room. I hate the air conditioner so I don't like to get into his room.
I like playing table tennis in the club. I am willing to go to the club when the temperiture is high. While I am doing exercise, I can forget the hot weather.
When I persuaded my husband to go there with me, he disagreed with me. He just walks around the mountain near his office everyday. Bye

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It's hot today. It seems like summer. Actually, it was chilly 3 days ago. It's hot from the day before yesterday. The weather is hot but I like summer. There is nothing special to do in summer season. But I easily feel cold so I don't need to worry about the cold weather in summer. My husband is opposite. He hates hot weather. So, he turns on the air conditioner all the time in his room. I hate the air conditioner so I don't like to get into his room.  I like playing table tennis in the club. I am willing to go to the club when the temperature is high. While I am doing my exercise, I can forget the hot weather. When I persuaded my husband to go there with me, he disagreed with me. He just walks around the mountain near his office every day. Bye

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