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제 목 What do you think makes a good city?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-10-10
작성글 A.) What do you think makes a good city? Please elaborate on your answer.

There could be various conditions for a good city.
Security and transportation would be especially important among them.
That is because they are key elements for freedom.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/07/22)

1. 경기가 좋아지고 있다는 게 피부에 와 닿아요.
I could feel the economic recovery on my skin.


2. 같은 직장에서 한솥밥 먹은 지 햇수로 벌써 7년째입니다.
Seven years have already passed since we worked together for the same company.

3. 저 이가 저렇게 화가 머리끝까지 난 건 나도 처음 봐요
I have never seen him get angry like that before.
교정내용

A.) What do you think makes a good city? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

   There could be various conditions for a good city.

   Security and transportation would be especially important among them.

   That is because they are key elements for freedom.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/07/22)

 

1. 경기가 좋아지고 있다는 게 피부에 와 닿아요.

    I could feel the economic recovery on my skin. 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  The economy is getting better. I can feel it in my bones.

    

2. 같은 직장에서 한솥밥 먹은 지 햇수로 벌써 7년째입니다.

   Seven years have already passed since we worked together for the same company.

=>  We’ve been working under the same roof for seven years now.

 

3. 저 이가 저렇게 화가 머리끝까지 난 건 나도 처음 봐요

   I have never seen him get angry like that before.   

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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