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제 목 Does the Koh-I-Noor belong to India?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-11-07
작성글 (11/07/22)

A.) Does the Koh-I-Noor belong to India? Please elaborate on your answer.

India's claim about the Koh-i-Noor would be legitimate if the following three conditions are all satisfied.
First, the last Sikh ruler had to have righteous ownership.
Second, India could be said to have succeeded the Sikh Empire.
Third, Britain should have forced him to abandon the diamond.
As long as I know, two of the conditions, the second and the third, are not met.
The Sikh Empire's territory was divided by both Pakistan and India, which is insufficient to admit India's succession.
The ruler gave Queen Victoria the diamond of his own will.
So India's ownership could not be accepted.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/07/22)
1. 제 말을 끝까지 들어보세요
Please hear me out.

2. 제 말이 끝날 때까지 기다려 주시겠어요?
Please wait till I finish my words.

3. 잠시 후에 발언권을 다시 드리겠습니다.
I will give you another chance to speak after a while.
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(11/07/22)

 

A.) Does the Koh-I-Noor belong to India? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

India's claim about the Koh-i-Noor would be legitimate if the following three conditions are all satisfied. 

First, the last Sikh ruler had to have righteous ownership. 

Second, India could be said to have succeeded the Sikh Empire. 

Third, Britain should have forced him to abandon the diamond.

As long as I know, two of the conditions, the second and the third, are not met.

The Sikh Empire's territory was divided by both Pakistan and India, which is insufficient to admit India's succession. 

The ruler gave Queen Victoria the diamond of his own will. 

So India's ownership could not be accepted.          

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/07/22)

1. 제 말을 끝까지 들어보세요

   Please hear me out.   

 

2. 제 말이 끝날 때까지 기다려 주시겠어요?

   Please wait till I finish my words.   

 

3. 잠시 후에 발언권을 다시 드리겠습니다.

  I will give you another chance to speak after a while.   


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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