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제 목 Should the volunteers try to save the stranded pilot whales?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-11-19
작성글 A.) Should the volunteers try to save the stranded pilot whales? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

The pilot whales' stranding is the matter beyond human territory.
But the pilot whales are also members of the ecology like the human beings.
Humans must do the best to help other members including the pilot whales to escape difficulties such as stranding.
So the volunteers should not stop saving the stranded pilot whales.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/18/22)

1. 시간이 다 된 것 같군요.
Time seems to be up.

2. 회의를 마무리 지읍시다.
Let's wrap up the meeting.

3. 논의 했던 사항들을 간단하게 요약합시다.
Let's summarize what we discussed.
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A.) Should the volunteers try to save the stranded pilot whales? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The pilot whales' stranding is the matter beyond human territory.

But the pilot whales are also members of the ecology like the human beings.

Humans must do the best to help other members including the pilot whales to escape difficulties such as stranding.  

So the volunteers should not stop saving the stranded pilot whales.    

 

=>  The pilot whales' stranding is a matter beyond human territory.

But pilot whales are also members of the ecology like human beings.

Humans must do their best to help other members including the pilot whales to escape difficulties such as stranding.  

So the volunteers should not stop saving the stranded pilot whales.    ​

 

   

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/18/22)

 

1. 시간이 다 된 것 같군요.

 Time seems to be up.  

 

2. 회의를 마무리 지읍시다.

 Let's wrap up the meeting.  

 

3. 논의 했던 사항들을 간단하게 요약합시다.

Let's summarize what we discussed.    

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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