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제 목 Lebanon’s most serious problem
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-11-30
작성글 A.) Why do you think is Lebanon’s most serious problem? Please elaborate on your answer.

Lebanon has a constitutional norm called the National Pact, which distributes public posts among religions.
It might be helpful to adjust conflicting interests into peace at the first stage.
But it does not reflect changes in public sentiment, which could be a reason for the unrest.
So Lebanon's most serious problem would be to adhere to the National Pact.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/30/22)

1. 방문해서 저희 제품 소개를 해드려도 될까요?
Would you mind if I visit you to introduce our products?

2. 약속을 바꿀 수 있을까요?
Could I change the appointment?

3. 시간을 다시 정해야 합니다.
You should make a schedule again.
교정내용

A.) Why do you think is Lebanon’s most serious problem? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Lebanon has a constitutional norm called the National Pact, which distributes public posts among religions.

It might be helpful to adjust conflicting interests into peace at the first stage.

But it does not reflect changes in public sentiment, which could be a reason for the unrest. 

So Lebanon's most serious problem would be to adhere to the National Pact.   

    

 B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/30/22)

 

1. 방문해서 저희 제품 소개를 해드려도 될까요?

Would you mind if I visit you to introduce our products?  

 

2. 약속을 바꿀 수 있을까요?

Could I change the appointment?  

 

3. 시간을 다시 정해야 합니다.

You should make a schedule again.

=>  I have to reschedule.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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