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제 목 How important is the art.
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-12-08
작성글 Art is important because we can communicate information and we can make social statement.
Without art we can't make art works.
So it's why the art is important
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Art is important because we can communicate, gain information and we can make social statement.


Without art, we can't make art works.

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So that's why the art is important.

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