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제 목 | How important is the art. |
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교정강사 | Lovely(D)O |
등록일 | 2022-12-08 |
작성글 |
Art is important because we can communicate information and we can make social statement. Without art we can't make art works. So it's why the art is important |
교정내용 |
CORRECTIONS:
Art is important because we can communicate, gain information and we can make social statement.
- Please be careful with the punctuations.
- Be careful in using determiner. |
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