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제 목 2022.12.09homework
교정강사 Renish(c)
등록일 2022-12-11
작성글 A. When was the last time you went to the zoo?

Maybe When i was 5th grade.


B. Yeah!

Yes Let's go right now.

Our team cheer up!
교정내용

A. When was the last time you went to the zoo?

 

Maybe when I was in 5th grade.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

(Capitalization)

(Punctuation) 

 

 

B. Yeah!

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Hurray! 

 

Yes Let's go right now.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

OK! Let's go!

 

Our team cheer up!

=> Anothoer way: This is another way of saying it.

Go team!​ 

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