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제 목 | Is it a good idea to shoot the wolves with paintball guns? |
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교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
등록일 | 2022-12-14 |
작성글 |
A.) Is it a good idea to shoot the wolves with paintball guns? Please elaborate on your answer. I wonder if shooting paintball guns would be effective for making the wolves more fearful or less tame. All the more I fear that it would likely make wolves frightened. So it should be replaced by other alternative. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/14/22) 1. 새로운 제품의 개요를 설명해 드리고자 합니다. I would like to explain the concept of the new product. 2. 오리엔테이션 비디오를 보겠습니다. You will watch an orientation video. 3. 생산 설비를 살펴 보겠습니다. We will survey the production facilities. |
교정내용 |
A.) Is it a good idea to shoot the wolves with paintball guns? Please elaborate on your answer.
I wonder if shooting paintball guns would be effective for making the wolves more fearful or less tame. All the more I fear that it would likely make wolves frightened. So it should be replaced by other alternative.
=> I wonder if shooting paintball guns would be effective in making the wolves more fearful or less tame. All the more I fear that it would likely make wolves frightened. So it should be replaced by other alternatives.
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(12/14/22)
1. 새로운 제품의 개요를 설명해 드리고자 합니다. I would like to explain the concept of the new product. ✔
2. 오리엔테이션 비디오를 보겠습니다. You will watch an orientation video. ✔
3. 생산 설비를 살펴 보겠습니다. We will survey the production facilities. ✔
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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