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교정강사 Rona(C)
등록일 2022-12-27
작성글 당장 해라! Do it right now!
"알았어요. Okay.
간식 좀 먹은 후에요." After I eat some snacks.
오, 방이 너무 지저분하구나. Oh, your room is so dirty.
"심순아, 머리가 너무 길다. 머리 좀 잘라야겠다." “Simsoon, your hair is too long. You should have your hair cut.
"싫은데, 전 이 머리모양이 좋아요." “No, I like this hair style.”
"지저분해 보이잖니. 미용실에 가서 잘라라." “It looks messy. Go to the hair salon and get a haircut.”
검은 머리에 갈색 눈이에요. She has black hair and brown eyes.
어디 보자. Let me see.
오! 내 친구가 저기 있네요. Oh! My friend is over there.
안녕! 심순아. Hello! Simsoon.
리엔이 너는 바쁘다던데. Rien, I heard you were busy.
정말 그랬어? Were you really busy?
교정내용

Do it right now!

Okay. After I eat some snacks. —> OK, after I have my snack.

Oh, your room is so di​rty.


Simsoon, your hair is too long. You should have your hair cut.

"No, I like this hair style.”

“It looks messy. Go to the hair salon and get a haircut.” ---> You look untidy. Go to the beauty shop and have a haircut.


She has black hair and brown eyes.

Let me see.

Oh! My friend is over there.


Hello! Simsoon.

Rien, I heard you were busy.

Were you really busy?​

 

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