영작교정

본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

제 목 HOMEWORK 12/20 ~ 12/22
교정강사 Rona(C)
등록일 2022-12-29
작성글 12/20
심순이가 누구니?
Who is Simsoon?
그녀는 우리반 친구야. 자전거도 잘 타고 피아노도 잘 쳐.
She is my classmate. She can ride a bike and play piano well.
누가 심순이니?
Who is Simsoon?

12/22
응, 가서 인사해.
Yes, go and say hello.
"안녕? 무슨 일이니? 내 말 들리니?"
"Hello? What's the matter? Can you hear me?"
맛있는 냄새가 난다.
It smells good.
교정내용

12/20 


 Who is Simsoon? 


 She is my classmate. She can ride a bike and play piano well. —> She can ride a bike and play the piano well. 

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


Who is Simsoon? —> Which girl is Simsoon?

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


12/22 


Yes, go and say hello. —> Yes she is. Go and say hello to her.

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


"Hello? What's the matter? Can you hear me?" 

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


It smells good.

 

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