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제 목 Was the Holodomor genocide?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-12-31
작성글 A.) Was the Holodomor genocide? Please elaborate on your answer.

The Holodomor is an event that happened in Ukraine between 1932 and 1933 when many people starved to death.
It is said to be ordered by Stalin, which means that it had been done deliberately.
So it hit the concept of genocide.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(12/28/22)

1. 몇 잔 더 할까요?
How about some more cups of drink.

2. 이제 집에 갑시다.
Now it is time to go home.

3. 이 프레젠테이션을 하게 되어 기쁩니다.
I am happy to do this presentation.
교정내용

A.) Was the Holodomor genocide? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Holodomor is an event that happened in Ukraine between 1932 and 1933 when many people starved to death. 

It is said to be ordered by Stalin, which means that it had been done deliberately.

So it hit the concept of genocide.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/28/22)

 

1. 몇 잔 더 할까요?

How about some more cups of drink.

=>  How about another round?

 

2. 이제 집에 갑시다.

Now it is time to go home.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  Let's call it a night.

 

3. 이 프레젠테이션을 하게 되어 기쁩니다.

I am happy to do this presentation.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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