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제 목 What are the differences between shield volcanoes and stratovolcanoes?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-12-31
작성글 A.) What are the differences between shield volcanoes and stratovolcanoes? Please elaborate on your answer.

Both shieldvolcanoes and stratovolcanose are two most common types of volcano.
The former has a shape of shield, the latter cone.
The difference comes from the angle of profile.
One is flat while the other is slanted sharply.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(12/30/22)

1. 저는 상품 매니저입니다.
I am a manger of commodity.

2. 저는 제품 생산을 담당합니다.
I am in charge of manufacturing.

3. 저는 처음부터 이 프로젝트에 참여해 왔습니다.
I have joined this project since the beginning.
교정내용

A.) What are the differences between shield volcanoes and stratovolcanoes? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Both shieldvolcanoes and stratovolcanose are two most common types of volcano.

The former has a shape of shield, the latter cone. 

The difference comes from the angle of profile. 

One is flat while the other is slanted sharply.

 

=>   Both Shield volcanoes and Stratovolcanoes are the two most common types of volcanoes.

The former has the shape of a shield, the latter a cone. 

The difference comes from the angle of the profile. 

One is flat while the other is slanted sharply.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/30/22)

 

1. 저는 상품 매니저입니다.

I am a manger of commodity.

=>   I am the product manager.

 

2. 저는 제품 생산을 담당합니다.

I am in charge of manufacturing.  

 

  3. 저는 처음부터 이 프로젝트에 참여해 왔습니다.

I have joined this project since the beginning.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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