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제 목 Should countries work together to create fusion power?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-01-06
작성글 A.) Should countries work together to create fusion power? Please elaborate on your answer.

Nuclear fusion produces electricity without emitting carbon dioxide or radioactivity, unlike nuclear fission.
It should be encouraged for the environment.
So no reason could be found to object the global cooperation for creating fusion power.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/02/22)

1. 저는 마케팅 부장으로 일하고 있습니다.
I am working as a manager for marketing.

2. 이번 제품의 추가된 특징에 대해 말씀 드리고 싶습니다.
Let me say about the additional features of this new item.

3. 이번 제품의 추가된 특징에 대해 말씀 드리고 싶습니다.
I would like to state the additional features of this product.
교정내용

A.) Should countries work together to create fusion power? Please elaborate on your answer.

  

   Nuclear fusion produces electricity without emitting carbon dioxide or radioactivity, unlike nuclear fission. 

   It should be encouraged for the environment.

   So no reason could be found to object the global cooperation for creating fusion power.    

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/02/22)

 

1. 저는 마케팅 부장으로 일하고 있습니다.

  I am working as a manager for marketing.  

 

 

2. 이번 제품의 추가된 특징에 대해 말씀 드리고 싶습니다.

  Let me say about the additional features of this new item.   

 

 

3. 이번 제품의 추가된 특징에 대해 말씀 드리고 싶습니다.

  I would like to state the additional features of this product.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  I'd like to familiarize you with our product.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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