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제 목 Will the nesting boxes halt the decline of the penguins?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-01-15
작성글 A.) Will the nesting boxes halt the decline of the penguins? Please elaborate on your answer.

The decline of the African penguins could be ascribed to the removal of guano from the seashore.
Guano is a penguin's hardened droppings which function as the base where penguins dig burrows.
Removing guano makes penguins lay eggs on the ground which are likely to be exposed to sunlight.
The overheated eggs could be abandoned by penguins.
The nesting boxes will be enough to substitute the guano and halt the decline of the penguins.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/13/22)

1. 이 그래프는 경비와 수입을 보여줍니다.
This graph shows expense and income.

2. 매출이 매년 꾸준히 증가하고 있습니다.
The sales has been continuously increasing annually.

3. 귀사의 제품이 잘 받아들여질 거라고 생각하십니까?
Do you think that your products will be successfully launched?
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A.) Will the nesting boxes halt the decline of the penguins? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The decline of the African penguins could be ascribed to the removal of guano from the seashore. 

Guano is a penguin's hardened droppings which function as the base where penguins dig burrows. 

Removing guano makes penguins lay eggs on the ground which are likely to be exposed to sunlight. 

The overheated eggs could be abandoned by penguins. 

The nesting boxes will be enough to substitute the guano and halt the decline of the penguins.     

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/13/22)

 

1. 이 그래프는 경비와 수입을 보여줍니다.

This graph shows expense and income.

=>  This graph shows our expenses and income.

 

 2. 매출이 매년 꾸준히 증가하고 있습니다.

The sales has been continuously increasing annually.

=>  The sales have been continuously increasing annually.​

 

 

 3. 귀사의 제품이 잘 받아들여질 거라고 생각하십니까?

Do you think that your products will be successfully launched?   

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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