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제 목 Why do many people go to Newgrange?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-01-18
작성글 A.) Why do many people go to Newgrange? Please elaborate on your answer.

Newgrange is a famous prehistoric monument which was carefully designed
to mark and allign with the Midwinter Day sunrise.
There sunrise can be seen through a roofbox above the entrance on the Midwinter Day,
which could attract many visitors each year.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/16/22)

1. 당신의 나라에서 고객들이 새로운 모델에 대해 어떻게 생각하나요?
How do customers think about the new model in your country?

2. 이 모델이 출시되기 전에 얼마 동안 테스트를 거쳤습니까?
How long has this model been tested before launching?

3. 저희 제품은 다른 나라에서 굉장히 잘 팔리고 있습니다.
Our products are selling very well in other countries.
교정내용

A.) Why do many people go to Newgrange? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

    Newgrange is a famous prehistoric monument which was carefully designed 

to mark and allign with the Midwinter Day sunrise. 

    There sunrise can be seen through a roofbox above the entrance on the Midwinter Day, 

which could attract many visitors each year.

 

=>     Newgrange is a famous prehistoric monument that was carefully designed 

to mark and align with the Midwinter Day sunrise.  

    Their sunrise can be seen through a roof box above the entrance on Midwinter Day, 

which could attract many visitors each year.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/16/22)

 

1. 당신의 나라에서 고객들이 새로운 모델에 대해 어떻게 생각하나요?

How do customers think about the new model in your country?  

​=>   How do your customers think about this new model in your country?

 

 2. 이 모델이 출시되기 전에 얼마 동안 테스트를 거쳤습니까?

How long has this model been tested before launching?  

 

3. 저희 제품은 다른 나라에서 굉장히 잘 팔리고 있습니다.

Our products are selling very well in other countries.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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