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제 목 2023.01.17
교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2023-01-20
작성글 A. What do children receive during Lunar New Year? Why?
They get pocket money. In Korea,it is called 세뱃돈.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(01/17/22)
1. Jean이모네 집은 크다.
Aunt jean's houes is big.
2. Sam 삼촌네 집이 Jean 이모네 집보다 크다.
Uncls Sam's house is bigger than aunt Jean's house.
3. 그 중에서는 할아버지네 집이 제일 크다.
among them, my grandfather's house is largest.
교정내용

A. What do children receive during Lunar New Year? Why?

They get pocket money. 

 => They receive money/allowance.

  => Your sentence was understandable, but here's a better way of saying it. 

• allowance = an amount of money that is given to someone regularly or for a specific purpose

example : a monthly allowance for household expenses

 

In Korea,it is called 세뱃돈.

 => In Korea, it is called 세뱃돈.

  => Corrected: The spacing of this sentence has been corrected.  ​  

 

 B. Make these sentences into English. 

 (01/17/22)

 1. Jean이모네 집은 크다.

Aunt jean's houes is big.

 => Aunt Jean's house is big.

  => Corrected: The spelling and capitalization of this sentence have been corrected.  ​   

 

2. Sam 삼촌네 집이 Jean 이모네 집보다 크다.

Uncls Sam's house is bigger than aunt Jean's house.

 => Uncle Sam's house is bigger than Aunt Jean's.

  => Corrected: The grammar of this sentence has been corrected.  ​  

 

3. 그 중에서는 할아버지네 집이 제일 크다.

among them, my grandfather's house is largest.​ 

 => The grandfather's house is the biggest among them.

  => Corrected: The grammar of this sentence has been corrected.  ​ 

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