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교정강사 Niah(C)
등록일 2023-01-26
작성글 A. Would you like to invest on stocks? Explain your answer.
I should be careful. Because there's a high chance of losing money for a moment. So it's better to start with a small sum.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(01/26/22)

1. 나는 코알라를 좋아해.
너는 어떠니?
2. 나는 펭귄을 좋아해.
3. 나도 펭귄을 좋아해.
-I like koala. How about you?
-I like penguin.
-I like penguin, too.
교정내용

A. Would you like to invest on stocks? Explain your answer.

I should be careful. Because there's a high chance of losing money for a moment. So it's better to start with a small sum. 

--> I should be careful about that because there's a high chance of losing money in a snap of a finger. So, it's better to start with a small sum of money.

==> These sentences are corrected grammatically. 


B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/26/22)

 

1. 나는 코알라를 좋아해.

너는 어떠니?

2. 나는 펭귄을 좋아해.

3. 나도 펭귄을 좋아해.

-I like koalas. How about you? 

-I like penguins​.

-I like penguins​, too.

 

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