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What I did do during Lunar New Year-homework |
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| 교정강사 | Lovely(D)O |
| 등록일 | 2023-02-02 |
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First,I went to Gwangalli Beach to see a new year drone show. And I visited my grandparents and get some money $$$$$ And I went shopping I did some games for the new year event:). That's all :P |
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CORRECTIONS:
First, I went to Gwanganli beach to see the new year drone show. After that, I visited my grandparents and got some money. And I went shopping. I played some games for the New Year's event. That's all I did in New Year.
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