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제 목 Will rare earths become more valuable than oil and gas?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-02-19
작성글 A.) Will rare earths become more valuable than oil and gas? Please elaborate on your answer.

Rare earths are crucial elements to make batteries for electric vehicles that will substitute fossil fuel cars.
So it will be natural that rare earths exceed oil and gas in value.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(02/13/22)

1. 본선 인도의 조건으로 귀사의 가격을 제시해 주세요.
Please present your price by FOB condition.

2. 귀사 최저가격의 견적을 가르쳐 주세요.
Please inform us of your estimate for the minimum price.

3. 모든 주문의 견적은 얼마인가요?
What is the estimate for all the orders?
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A.) Will rare earths become more valuable than oil and gas? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Rare earths are crucial elements to make batteries for electric vehicles that will substitute fossil fuel cars. 

So it will be natural that rare earths exceed oil and gas in value.   

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/13/22)

 

1. 본선 인도의 조건으로 귀사의 가격을 제시해 주세요.

Please present your price by FOB condition.  

 

2. 귀사 최저가격의 견적을 가르쳐 주세요.

Please inform us of your estimate for the minimum price.  

 

3. 모든 주문의 견적은 얼마인가요?

What is the estimate for all the orders?   

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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