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제 목 | Should Turkey’s government be criticized for its initial response? |
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교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
등록일 | 2023-03-01 |
작성글 |
A.) Should Turkey’s government be criticized for its initial response? Please elaborate on your answer. The double earthquakes in Türkiye were a catastrophic disaster which killed many people. Türkiye is where four tectonic plates meet, so it is vulnerable to earthquake. Türkiyen government has collected tax for earthquake. But it failed to detect the sign of earthquake. It announced the state of emergency 2 days after the quakes, which means that it did not take appropriate actions. So it will not avoid criticism. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/27/2 3) 1. 1,000 개 이상 주문하시면 특별 가격을 제시할 수 있습니다. If you order more than 1000 pieces, you will be provised a special price. 2. 제품 생산에 한계가 있습니다 . There is a limitation in production. 3. 제품의 가격은 500 의 배수 단위로 나뉩니다. The price will vary by multiplying unit of 500. |
교정내용 |
A.) Should Turkey’s government be criticized for its initial response? Please elaborate on your answer.
The double earthquakes in Türkiye were a catastrophic disaster which killed many people. Türkiye is where four tectonic plates meet, so it is vulnerable to earthquake. Türkiyen government has collected tax for earthquake. But it failed to detect the sign of earthquake. It announced the state of emergency 2 days after the quakes, which means that it did not take appropriate actions. So it will not avoid criticism.
=> The double earthquakes in Türkiye were catastrophic disasters that killed many people. Türkiye is where four tectonic plates meet, so it is vulnerable to earthquakes. Türkiyen government has collected tax for the earthquake. But it failed to detect the sign of an earthquake. It announced a state of emergency 2 days after the quakes, which means it did not take appropriate actions. So it will not avoid criticism.
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(02/27/2 3)
1. 1,000 개 이상 주문하시면 특별 가격을 제시할 수 있습니다. If you order more than 1000 pieces, you will be provised a special price. => If you order 1,000 or more, we can give you a special price.
2. 제품 생산에 한계가 있습니다. There is a limitation in production. ✔ 3. 제품의 가격은 500 의 배수 단위로 나뉩니다. The price will vary by multiplying unit of 500. => We have price breaks at multiples of 500. • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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