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제 목 Why did Michelangelo burn his sketches?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-03-19
작성글 A.) Why did Michelangelo burn his sketches? Please elaborate on your answer.

Michelangelo is said to have worried that people could think his artworks less perfect
if they knew he drew sketches beforehand.
That might be why he burnt his sketches.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/13/23)

1. 계약서의 조건에 대해서 이야기 해봅시다.
Let's talk about the terms of the contract.

2. 계약은 3 년간 유효합니다.
The contract will remain valid for 3 years.

3. 계약은 양사가 동의하여 서명하면 발효됩니다.
The contract will take effect after both companies sign to agree.

교정내용

A.) Why did Michelangelo burn his sketches? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Michelangelo is said to have worried that people could think his artworks less perfect 

if they knew he drew sketches beforehand. 

That might be why he burnt his sketches.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/13/23)

 

1. 계약서의 조건에 대해서 이야기 해봅시다.

Let's talk about the terms of the contract.  

2. 계약은 3 년간 유효합니다.

The contract will remain valid for 3 years.  

3. 계약은 양사가 동의하여 서명하면 발효됩니다.

The contract will take effect after both companies sign to agree.  


 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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