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제 목 Why is the Festival of Colors becoming more of a global event?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-04-02
작성글 A.) Why is the Festival of Colors becoming more of a global event? Please elaborate on your answer.

Over the last centuries, many Hindus have migrated to other regions around the world.
So the Festival of Colors has spread to become more of a global event.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/28/23)

1. 지정된 계좌로 송금했습니다 .
I made a remittance to the designated account.

2. 화요일까지 귀사로 2 만 달러를 보내겠습니다 .
I will remit 20,000 dollars to your company by Tuesday.

3. 경리 쪽에 확인해야 합니다
It must be confirmed by the accounting department.

교정내용

A.) Why is the Festival of Colors becoming more of a global event? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Over the last centuries, many Hindus have migrated to other regions around the world.

So the Festival of Colors has spread to become more of a global event.  

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/28/23)

 

1. 지정된 계좌로 송금했습니다 . 

I made a remittance to the designated account.  

 2. 화요일까지 귀사로 2 만 달러를 보내겠습니다 .

I will remit 20,000 dollars to your company by Tuesday.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  $20,000 will be transferred to your account by Tuesday.

 

3. 경리 쪽에 확인해야 합니다

It must be confirmed by the accounting department.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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